Saturday, September 12, 2009

Rivals in Love

Rivals in Love
Two Guys and a Lady
Words by: Kevin Llanera


It started when I met this person his name was Karlo. He went out to join his newly found friends. He then met this lady named Joanna. Joanna was shy at first and was pretty. The other friends where discussing about their love life while the two of them started talking like what school they went, where do they work and many more.
Karlo then started to text and sometimes call Joanna every week. Karlo talked about his experiences in love, being religious, family problems and many more. Joanna even blamed Karlo for his mistakes in life.
As they were getting along Karlo made a mistake that made Joanna angry but later forgave Karlo .Then a couple of weeks came he lessens the text to Joanna just to give space and probably not to have any pressure to her.

Along Came Mak

There was a get together again from the group of friends in a mall. Mak who wants to be included in the newly found friends also joined. There were these two ladies one was Joanna while the other named Gj. The two then left after awhile to buy something.
He then said to the other people who were there that he really like this girl named Joanna. He find Joanna pretty.
Little does Mak know Karlo also like Joanna and made Karlo a bit worried.

Date of the two Karlo and Joanna and Texting Again

Karlo and Joanna dated a couple of times. There was a time that Karlo gave Joanna chocolates. One was during their meet up with the group of friends the other was during a dinner date.Karlo then slowly started texting Joanna again like "how's work? and how are you?"
Karlo and Joanna talked one day but not that serious one just about life. Joanna then said to Karlo thru text that
"I got a gift from Mak and we even took a picture with the gift."
Karlo then said to Joanna "Don't you know Mak likes you he said it while the two of you where gone looking for something." Joanna didn't reply from the text.
The last text during that night that Karlo received from Joanna was
"You can court that crush of yours from now on and sorry but I don't want to talk about it nice meeting you"

The Day Has Come

After a couple of weeks Joanna decided to finally let Mak become his boyfriend who continues to give Joanna several gifts like chocolates, flowers and many more almost every week. Joanna even texted Karlo about Mak. Joanna even said "I will finally have a boyfriend." Karlo then told it to his group of friends and he was surprised from what Joanna said to him.
Karlo was so hurt and cried especially at night because he really like Joanna and he was serious in pursuing her. He believes they were getting along already and remembered her line saying “I want to know the person one day at a time”. He knew he is slow in courting Joanna because that’s how it’s supposed to be unlike Mak like there is no tomorrow in giving gifts.

Karlo's Message


He already had the experience that happened a couple of years back that he liked someone and ended up losing the girl because of some rivalry. Karlo is also afraid that it will be influenced by someone..Karlo's message to Joanna is just simple "It’s not about giving all the gifts or what you want most it’s who you are going to be with and seeing most of the time that matters."

1 comments:

drey said...

I know how painful it is to pursue someone and ended up being on the losing end. I may not know the details of your relationship however life has always given us tests and the results may not always be in our favor. But then you can always find a better one. Cheer up!